Not bad, animation still need a lot of work, but it does work well for the the simple story you are trying to tell.
This was terrible. Just simply terible. Animation was bad, there was no story to it, it wasn't at all funny at all and the end was just plain gross. You can tell just by looking at you put NO efford what so ever into it.
Dude. This is my third upload here. What did you expect? Egoraptor anmations or some sort? What the hell man. I know it sucks, but dude. You can't expect a new animator to do everything good in just one scratch. Sure I could take more time into it, but still. I'm no fuckng Egoraptor.
Now this is a good animation, I don't right reviews often but this is well worth one. The animation is interesting, the slow motion really reminds most of us on how time seems to fly by when you are underground. the textures and effects you used where well done and well place through out the animation. The wording and voice actor where really supered and really adds to the eerie feeling of the fear and desperation that run through ones mind as all life seems to slip away. And the twist you added at the end, good idea. I sware I have never seen any other minecraft animation do that before. I'm glad to see that there are still some fresh new ideas out there.
When I first time I encounted that thing ((just a few days ago since i had to take some time off from minecraft after my computer crashed)), I screamed in real life and ran like my ass was on fire. Second time, wasn't so lucky. Got ambushed by a creeper and one those things and a tip to all new players to the game. Don't make the same mistake I did, I didn't know at the time that looking at those things will cause them to attack. Unless you got a pumpkin on you head, then they just stare at you. Unless you a equipped to armour and weapons and know what you are doing, do NOT approach.
Over all, I give you animation a vote of 5/5 and 5 star rating. Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward in seeing more work from you.
LOL Nice job. XD That's pretty much how I imagine how twilight sparkles' reaction would be like if she found out about the fan base. Here's an idea, maybe you should make a few more animations about each pony and how you think their reaction would be if they learned about the truth. XD I imagion that Fluttershy would be terrified to be stalked by a brony, PinkiePie would most likely likely love it, trying to make friend with every brony until she realized how creepy they are, Rainbowdash would probley love it until she saw all the porn of her and Applejack. XD
I'm glad to see you finished this, I remember that the first time i saw this the part where he threw the scissors wasn't done, it was nothing but text. It's good to see that there are some people who will finish what they have started even after the due date has pasted. That's a sign of someone who's committed to their work. Good job, 10/10
Pretty dang good
This is pretty good story, but I notice at time your animations gets abit choopy or lazy, but over all the story is fairly decent, but their reactions are kinda stiff. A lot of people don't show much concern about the situation nor fear. I can understand why some of them might not show their emotion, but their face seem so stiff. But none or less, you still did an awesome job and look forward to seeing more. ^^
Rather good entry
I must admit, near the end your animation does get a tad lazy, but personally I do find it does add abit to the animation itself. Makes me think I'm watching an old cartoon, or playing a old video game for like the game boy. The music is killer, it really add to the animation. ^^ And I know it's going to be a very hard desion for the judges to make between you and Dave. I wish you the best of luck, and we'll know tomorrow who will make it to the next round
Believe it or not, but after seeing this I actully went and bough a copy of it... lets say it took me a long time to figure out how not to die..... but why did you built a house out wood, building it in a mountian/cliff is better. not only does it keep you safe and you can find ores in it, but also if you take the flat areas out and replace it with glass, you can watch all the monsters commit suicide trying to get to you.
I know you will win
Just looking at this I can tell you have a lot of talents and if you keep it up. At this rate, I know that you will be this year TOFA this year. ^^ I already checked the other constants and out them all, you are the best.
It finally things are all starting to make sense... Ever since i turned 14 when I had a near death experiences, I started to start making all these theories and started to look into our past. Trying to make sense of everything and something I took notice over the years, when thinking back to my childhood and I remember it really well.. sadly..... I notice that people where getting stupider and more violent and most (not all) people the same age as me are missing common sense. Just to note this now I was born with ADD and most doctors have said to me I'm not subpost to be this smart (since as a child, not only did I chew a poisonous plant TWICE, but also fell down the stairs head first and smashed into the washing machine, but also had my head smashed into the pavement by my so called "peers" out of pure entertainment for them also I used to think I was a bird and try to jump out the window. XD As well failed spelling and still can't say all my words right)) But to show what I mean, we where watching a movie in childstudies a few months back called Origins of Human Aggression. Part way through the movie, the teacher stopped the video as asked us if we had a toddler, any where between the ages 3 to 4 and they hit another child, what mephod would be best to disciplined the child and teach them that violence isn't right. I answer that talking to the child and trying to explain why they shouldn't do that is the right way, and that if they didn't do it again, put them in a time out or give them a light smack on the hand. the next thing I know, they who class burst out laughing ((like normal when I open my mouth)) and started calling me a dump a** b**** who knows nothing and they went on about the right way to punish the child is to beat their head in with a 2 by 4 until their head is a bloody mess. I was horrified a coarse and so was 3 other people, ((this is a class has 23 people)) and after the teacher the quiet the class and scolded the people for acting in such of manior and that I was right. One my class mates tried blinding me and when that didn't work and I was exnoring his death treats, he throw a sharp piece of metal into my back and everybody was laughing histarically out the fact i was in a lot of pain. And they went on bragging about it like they should be rewarded a metal. Hell, there's some still trying to temp others into bring a gun so they can kill me out of pure sport. When 2012 happens, I hope that the human race gets smarter. like seriously. It's kinda hard that the "disease" ((what they call me as a child)) has better marks then most of them ((there's only 5 or 6 who sometimes have a higher mark, but most of them the mark goes shooting down within a short time)). I just prey humanity doesn't get any stupider or else I'm going to die and I had people trying to kill me since I was freak-en 7.
Over all, I give your animation 10/10 and 5/5. Keep up the good work and I look forward to see more from you.
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